Editing work
Through my developmental editing of your manuscript, I will provide a detailed analysis of your story with in-depth chapter-by-chapter feedback and practical guidance so you can make the revisions you need.
I offer ongoing guidance throughout your project. I’m available to answer questions, clarify feedback and support you as your story evolves.
Also included is line-by-line copy-editing to correct grammatical errors, typos, spelling mistakes, and ensure spelling and formatting consistency.
I give detailed suggestions to improve sentence syntax and paragraph structure, and I’ll check for check for repetition and redundancy and factual errors
Writing retreat
A peaceful retreat space for writers in Portugal. Casa Jacaranda is my home and creative base in Portugal. It’s a welcoming space surrounded by nature, perfect for writers who need time, quiet and inspiration.
Whether you want a private writing retreat, a focused revision week or a restorative break to reconnect with your creativity, Casa Jacaranda offers a calm, comfortable studio that covers the full villa floor space (150m2).
It provides a supportive environment designed for concentrated creative work, with daily editorial consultations.
There are beautiful walks nearby through woodland, over coastal cliffs and expansive beaches to help you recharge or find inspiration.
Jim Dempsey
I’m a professional developmental editor, writing coach and host of Casa Jacaranda. For 20+ years, I’ve helped authors develop their writing skills, strengthen their craft and connect with the deeper intention behind their work.
My approach is thoughtful and collaborative, shaped by a long career of helping writers shape their manuscripts into books they’re proud to publish, without losing the voice that makes their work unique.
I have written many articles on writing and editing, and am a regular contributor to Writer Unboxed.
I am the co-founder and host of Wordplay, which organises events for writers, including open mic evenings and monthly workshops throughout Portugal.
Find out how professional editing can improve your novel, send Jim the first 1500 words of your novel for a FREE SAMPLE EDIT.
What’s included in my developmental edit?
- chapter‑by‑chapter analysis: clear, actionable feedback on structure, pacing, emotional beats and narrative flow
- character development insights: to ensure your characters feel real, consistent and compelling, with arcs that resonate
- plot and structure refinement: to strengthen coherence, tension and momentum so your story keeps readers turning pages
- market‑aware guidance: understand how your novel fits into the current literary landscape and how to position it for success
- tone, style & consistency checks: meticulous attention to clarity, rhythm and voice, ensuring your prose captivates the readers
- narrative flow improvements: suggestions that improve the flow and readability, making your story even more engaging
How much does an in-depth analysis of your book cost?
Personal, professional editing and analysis with clear, simple pricing
Only 2 cents (US dollar) per word.
No hidden charges.
No extra costs.
Affordable and transparent.
The typical turnaround time for a 60,000 word novel is only 15 working days.
The small print
The cost may be more when English is not your first language, usually 1 cent (US dollars) extra per word on the above-noted price.
Please get in touch for prices in other currencies.
The free sample edit applies only to the first 1500 words of a completed novel manuscript (of more than 10,000 words).
For more details, see the frequently asked questions.
Mentoring that supports your creative life
Editing is only part of the journey.
I mentor writers through one‑to‑one sessions that focus on intention, process and the emotional landscape of writing. These conversations help you understand your strengths, navigate challenges, develop your skills and build momentum in a way that fits into your daily life.
The process helps writers build discipline, deepen their practice and reconnect with the joy and fun of creating.
Ready to begin?
If you’d like to discuss your project, book mentoring, or enquire about a retreat at Casa Jacaranda, you’re welcome to get in touch.
Write at Casa Jacaranda
A peaceful retreat space for writers in Portugal
Whether you want a private writing retreat, a focused revision week or a restorative break to reconnect with your creativity, Casa Jacaranda offers:
- a calm, comfortable studio with space (150m2) to write
- beautiful walking routes and nearby beaches
- optional editorial consultations during your stay
- a supportive, creative environment designed for deep work
If you’d like to book time at Casa Jacaranda or combine your stay with editorial sessions, just get in touch.
Testimonials
Jim’s place fosters inspiration. It’s deliberately, but low-key multi-purpose: it could be a gallery; a dance or drama space; a cool somewhere to write your magnum opus. A comfortable bed, a well-appointed kitchen, books everywhere. All you need to do is bring your brain – and, of course, a pen and paper.
Jim creates a safe, non-judgemental space in which you can feel focussed and comfortably creative. He doesn’t push or pressurise, he makes the whole process fun and inventive. He loves writing, loves writers and loves to help writers write.
Dave Kurley
If you are looking at improving your writing skills in a nurturing, non-threatening environment, nothing beats an immersive experience at Casa Jacaranda.
After participating in one of the writing workshops under Jim’s expert and engaging guidance, you can retreat in your own space and let your creative juices flow, sounding off ideas in a peaceful, serene environment. The magical surroundings of the Óbidos lagoon will certainly inspire you!
Hélène Knoerr
If you are a writer, either beginner or accomplished, experiencing one of Jim’s retreats will support and encourage you to reach your goals. The retreat at Casa Jacaranda is the perfect balance of free writing, inspiration, expert coaching, and exploring nature.
A respected leader in the local writing community, Jim’s expertise and caring one on one coaching style will get you bubbling with ideas, excited to write and feeling confident in the process. This magical and cozy space is located in one of the most stunning areas of Portugal will nurture both productivity and restoration. This is destined to be a repeat visit, so consider this is a gift to yourself and book it now!
Helen Gallaway
I signed up for Jim’s workshop as a complete rookie. I’d never really thought of myself as a writer and wasn’t entirely convinced I belonged there.
After a handful of sessions, I found myself looking forward to them and thinking about story ideas when I wasn’t there. That’s probably the highest compliment I can give.
Jim makes writing feel accessible without making it feel easy. The prompts get you started, the feedback keeps you going, and somehow you end up writing more than you thought you could.
I’m not saying I’ve become a writer. But for the first time, I’m wondering if I might have one in me somewhere.
Niall King
I have attended a great number of workshops and writing groups led and organized by Jim, who is a truly exceptional facilitator. Not only does he manage and organize activities in an engaging way, he has an excellent quality for understanding how to adapt the workshop as he gets to know the people attending. The prompts and activities are fun, but more importantly, they really get me writing.
I feel like since working with Jim my writing abilities have been unleashed and I have developed a strong practice. He also really helped me understand where I can improve and how to write to my strengths. I look forward to participating in many more of his workshops in the future!
Dixon Bordiano
Jim is great at encouraging writers to share their work, and coming up with interesting writing exercises.
Vanessa Arnold
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