Editing
Through my developmental editing of your manuscript, I will provide a detailed analysis of your story with in-depth chapter-by-chapter feedback and practical guidance so you can make the revisions you need.
I offer ongoing guidance throughout your project. I’m available to answer questions, clarify feedback and support you as your story evolves.
Also included is line-by-line copy-editing to correct grammatical errors, typos, spelling mistakes, and ensure spelling and formatting consistency.
I give detailed suggestions to improve sentence syntax and paragraph structure, and I’ll check for check for repetition and redundancy and factual errors
Retreat
A peaceful retreat space for writers in Portugal. Casa Jacaranda is my home and creative base in Portugal. It’s a welcoming space surrounded by nature, perfect for writers who need time, quiet and inspiration.
Whether you want a private writing retreat, a focused revision week or a restorative break to reconnect with your creativity, Casa Jacaranda offers a calm, comfortable studio that covers the full villa floor space (150m2).
It provides a supportive environment designed for concentrated creative work, with daily editorial consultations.
There are beautiful walks nearby through woodland, over coastal cliffs and expansive beaches to help you recharge or find inspiration.
About me
I work as a developmental editor, writing coach and am host of Casa Jacaranda. For 20+ years, I’ve helped authors develop their writing skills, strengthen their craft and connect with the deeper intention behind their work.
My approach is thoughtful and collaborative, shaped by a long career of helping writers shape their manuscripts into books they’re proud to publish, without losing the voice that makes their work unique.
I have written many articles on writing and editing, and am a regular contributor to Writer Unboxed.
I am the co-founder and host of Wordplay, which organises events for writers, including open mic evenings and monthly workshops throughout Portugal.
Find out how professional editing can improve your novel, send Jim the first 1500 words of your novel for a FREE SAMPLE EDIT.
What’s included in my developmental edit?
- chapter‑by‑chapter analysis: clear, actionable feedback on structure, pacing, emotional beats and narrative flow
- character development insights: to ensure your characters feel real, consistent and compelling, with arcs that resonate
- plot and structure refinement: to strengthen coherence, tension and momentum so your story keeps readers turning pages
- market‑aware guidance: understand how your novel fits into the current literary landscape and how to position it for success
- tone, style & consistency checks: meticulous attention to clarity, rhythm and voice, ensuring your prose captivates the readers
- narrative flow improvements: suggestions that improve the flow and readability, making your story even more engaging
How much does an in-depth analysis of your book cost?
Personal, professional editing and analysis with clear, simple pricing
Only 2 cents (US dollar) per word.
No hidden charges.
No extra costs.
Affordable and transparent.
The typical turnaround time for a 60,000 word novel is only 15 working days.
The small print
The cost may be more when English is not your first language, usually 1 cent (US dollars) extra per word on the above-noted price.
Please get in touch for prices in other currencies.
The free sample edit applies only to the first 1500 words of a completed novel manuscript (of more than 10,000 words).
For more details, see the frequently asked questions.
Mentoring that supports your creative life
Editing is only part of the journey.
I mentor writers through one‑to‑one sessions that focus on intention, process and the emotional landscape of writing. These conversations help you understand your strengths, navigate challenges, develop your skills and build momentum in a way that fits into your daily life.
The process helps writers build discipline, deepen their practice and reconnect with the joy and fun of creating.
Ready to begin?
If you’d like to discuss your project, book mentoring, or enquire about a retreat at Casa Jacaranda, you’re welcome to get in touch.
Write at Casa Jacaranda
A peaceful retreat space for writers in Portugal
Whether you want a private writing retreat, a focused revision week or a restorative break to reconnect with your creativity, Casa Jacaranda offers:
- a calm, comfortable studio with space (150m2) to write
- beautiful walking routes and nearby beaches
- optional editorial consultations during your stay
- a supportive, creative environment designed for deep work
If you’d like to book time at Casa Jacaranda or combine your stay with editorial sessions, just get in touch.
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